illustration learning log


I've just started an illustration course with the open college of the arts.

This is my learning log.

Monday, 7 April 2014

Part 3: working it out: project visuals: making a mock-up

For this exercise I chose to make a mock-up of the book 'The catcher in the rye' by J. D. Salinger, first published in 1951.

It is narrated by the main character, Holden Caulfield, a troubled seventeen year old boy who has just been expelled from boarding school (again!).

The book is an account of how he spent the next few days in New York city, following his expulsion from school, before returning home to his parents for the Christmas holidays.

He is angry, disturbed and disillusioned.  One of the few people with whom he can communicate is his younger sister, Phoebe, whom he loves.

He is on the brink of adulthood and sees himself as a saviour of children, protecting their innocence.  He pictures himself in a field of rye at a cliff-edge.  Children are playing around him and he catches them if they go too close to the edge - he is saving them from adulthood.

For the illustration I wanted to communicate the anger and disillusionment that he felt, and so I decided to use mainly red, together with black, white and grey for the colours.

As Phoebe was so important to him I needed to include a representation of her place in his life.  The name Phoebe means bright and pure, and in Greek mythology she was a Titan associated with the moon.

Across the top third of the illustration a row of rectangles represent books on the left hand side (as symbols of his school life) and on the right they represent New York city blocks.

At the front is a field of rye - on the left hand side it is trampled and broken, whilst on the right it's blowing freely in the breeze.

The illustration represents the torment felt by Holden, the reality of his life and his hopes and dreams. 

version 01

As part of my research I looked into the styling of Penguin modern classics with the intention of using the format for the illustration.  As you can see by the front cover of 'On the Road' by Jack Kerouac and 'Breakfast at Tiffany's' by Truman Capote, the styling is not compatible.  So I made an another mock-up in Penguin modern classic style to see how it would look.


Sunday, 6 April 2014

Part 3: working it out: project visuals: client visuals

This exercise is about understanding how to create a readable client visual by reducing an illustration to its main structural form.

I chose to work on a vintage advertising poster and a print by Angie Lewin.




In version 1 of the poster I included all the basic structure, some detail and hand drawn text.  It gives a good idea of how it would look.

In version 2 I reduced the detail and just indicated where the text would be placed.  It still makes sense and could probably be edited further and retain its readability.

For the other illustration I chose Angie Lewin's wood engraving 'pale day'.



 
In the first version I included lots of detail and it gives a good impression of how the finished piece would look.  In the next two versions I reduced the amount of detail and I think it still retains its readability.  Again, it would be possible to reduce it further to its basic shapes, but I think maybe it wouldn't convey the real feeling of the piece.